yo!

bro, i love the lyrics and delivery. the laid-back confidence in your tone is convincing and it makes you want to consciously pay attention to the lyrics, and the wordplay stays consistent throughout. lyrics and wordplay seems to be your bread and butter, so i would just always try to come up with more clever lines. also getting some catchy melodies for your hooks can go a long way for making your music more listenable.

all and all, there's a real talent and potential here. i would just focus on strong song structure that ties a track together, so you're not just completely carried by your wordplay. keep it up my man 🙏