the production is clean af 😂 you got a nice little flow too for sure. delivery is smooth but i'd say putting more of a chill confidence in your tone could improve it. did you produce this as well or just do the vocals?
i love the message in the lyrics, but if i'm being honest i found the songwriting to be a little blase. maybe it's just me, but i would try to work in more colorful wordplay to keep the listener more entertained.
all and all, it's a chill vibe for sure 👌 reminds me of when Nujabes would get an American rapper on a track of his. keep progressing my man
the production is clean af 😂 you got a nice little flow too for sure. delivery is smooth but i'd say putting more of a chill confidence in your tone could improve it. did you produce this as well or just do the vocals?
i love the message in the lyrics, but if i'm being honest i found the songwriting to be a little blase. maybe it's just me, but i would try to work in more colorful wordplay to keep the listener more entertained.
all and all, it's a chill vibe for sure 👌 reminds me of when Nujabes would get an American rapper on a track of his. keep progressing my man