yo!

there is definitely a catchy little melody here, but the recording/mixing/mastering all definitely needs work. the vocals are fun and the beat selection is on-point, but i would definitely play around with how you're mixing your tracks and if possible, invest in some more high-quality equipment to record and sound-engineer yourself 🙏

hey brother, i was just gonna say a similar thing to floating roots, was gonna suggest mixing your vocals a little more and try putting some compression on them, might help with normalizing the volume of your vocals and let it sit pretty in middle of your mix. You can also cut the low end of the vocals too so it doesnt muddy up the whole track. Great song otherwise, your there creatively :)

-Okkii